She (revised 2)
She's seeking still, a peacefulness of mindOr maybe just a moment with no liesFor in her days, her dreams are hard to findAnd during nights, these vanish in the skies.With weary eyes, she starts her...
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This is getting closer. I think the couplet still needs some work (I, who just finished wrestling with an unsatisfactory couplet of my own. I hope it's better now.)Perhaps what you need is to wipe out...
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MelodySonnets ARE really a challenge..and i find them worth every minute thak you for the posti will work on the sonnet..but not right a waymaybe if i leave it for a while, i will be able to add more...
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